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HOLY FUCKING SHIT

I thought this was meant to be a flash portal... way to rape the competition... <3

Cute.

Even through it was sprites, it was a very cute story. :) Thanks for sharing with all us gamer/nerds.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Wanted to see the 'predictable' cheese grater death!!! :'( Would have been hilarious to splat then slowly 'grate' himself down...

Still awesome animation 4/5 - 9/10

WhiteLightning responds:

Ah, you're one of THOSE people : )

I don't rate 10's often.

I appreciate the efforts to make it as smooth as it was. Thanks for the watch. <3

It's good.

People need to watch all the way through as it does get better and better. Only a week is very impressive! :)

I look forward to more from you.

Reason why this won't have the score it deserves.

There really is no reason why you should have added more (and in some cases better) sound effects throughout that animation. It really did make it seem empty.

I don't normally write reviews, but I know you've got talent and I want to encourage you as much as I can to continue animating. I think it's great you've discovered the squash and squeeze effect but PLEASE don't use it for EVERY cut scene. It really took it away from the 'action like' animation you seemed to be achieving. There's many more ways to pull off the effect without making everything so 'cartoony'. You know what I mean.

Next thing I'd love to see you work on is your line art. The long view of the sand... man. Was perfect. Lines weren't too thick, gave I nice clean feel to it and it's all because it was zoomed out on a regular drawing you did. If you manage to zoom in more when doing you clean up for your animation you'll find it'll look 100 times better! (part where his head gets pulled off)

Backgrounds are a bitch I know. And it's ACTION PACKED enough for me to not notice them until the 2nd time round. This is just as important as your character art. Trust me - I've failed a lot of my own animations for lack of background.

And finally - Colors and shading. I know shading can be a bitch but it makes a lot of difference! As for colors.... Try to steer clear of the basic pallet flash gives you, fade the bright greens into a more greyish pale color and you'll notice it'll look twice as effective. Johnny Utah did a tutorial on this, definatly check it out. It's in his news feed.

Great work over all. I want to see much more from you in the future buddy. I hope my review doesn't discourage you but more so ignites you to try new things.

Good luck!

You're right this is spam.

I was sitting on my left hand, sorry. ZERO

Tom and I watched this.

And my cheeks actually started hurting from how much I was laughing. Be confident this is a great first flash voices were good but needed subtitles.

Looking forward to you next submission! Merry Christmas with your front page!

Really good!

Do one favor for me QUICK!! The end (main point) it lags to all shit with the blur of the time portal and ruined my whole experience.

Please remove the blur effect on the background there, your animation will score a LOT higher. It's a shame this ruined my whole experience though i'm giving you the benefit of the doubt.

Cheers!

Annoyingly Bad Quality

But storyline, art style and concept were outrageously hilarious i couldn't but help share this link with all my friends!

Great work, please think about export quality next time and look for some more alternatives (as I noticed flash wasn't used much for most of your effects).

Keep it up dude! :D

Chag responds:

The amount of time trying to get an export that was under the file limit and still good quality drove me insane.

I'm really annoyed with how bad the quality is, but I eventually just had to run with it and provide a link to the high res version instead =\

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Sam Green @SamGreen

Age 37, Male

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Australia

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